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Posted 05/17/09 17:35 by RubbuhChikinMan
pretty nice tune, I like it the transitions between the parts were somewhat abrupt, but it's in a way for the best, since it gave the song a certain "edge" and more kick. I liked the "satiated" harmony of the piece, the guitars managed to create a nice full sounding wall of notes that was quite pleasing. I also liked the dissonance in verse 3... it was nowhere near what I'd expect as chaos tho, just so you know the piece isn't 200% win though.. I wasn't fond of either of the bridges, and I would have liked some more "pronounced" melodies throughout, the piece felt a little empty. maybe the vocals would fix that... anyway, wrapping up, it's a pretty good song, you seem to have grown since I last listened to you. awaiting more stuff.
Posted 05/20/09 16:24 by Donkey of Steel
Intro is very good, but I don´t like this fucking midi clean guitar... It suxxx!!! But the intro is still cool The following riff is your typical 8th style and I think you´re copying yourself a bit with this stuff, I mean this accord playing stuff is pretty ovious to come in your songs. On the other hand you managed somehow to create a very fitting end time mood though, so I guess it deserves to be there The Verse is good again, but the transition into it deserves a bit more work I think. When going into the bridge you made it better. Can´t tell much about the bridge without knowing its vocalline. It could be totally awesome or suck as hell. Just don´t know this way, but I´m pretty confident you got something superb in mind ;) Yeah... Chorus is that riffing again, told you already what I think about. Bridge 2 is very cool, but I think you could have given it a bit more time and space to rise. Working a bit on this part would surely end in an awesome result. Interlude: I love it man, one of the best things I ever heard from you. 94 - 97 was very unnecessary, BUT 98 - 101 kicks ass to the moon!!! Verse 3 I think is a bit unfitting for its topic. Last Corus: This time I really think it makes much sence and the chord progression and mood close the song in a very good way. Under the line there´s a song with much cool stuff and also a lot of things which you could work on. But in this parts also is lot of potential, so I guess I join Rumpy with giving you 4 stars.
Posted 05/26/09 22:33 by Topti
Poor effort to say the truth. Intro isn't very musical as for me (and it's still one of the most melodic parts here). Riffs are primitive like tribes fighting for control after the collision I guess... Transitions (or should I say lack of them?) sound out of place, not a good thing if You ask me. Melodies included in the song... I could write some pointless dissonant scale walkings and try to sell it as postapocalyptic jazz (like the mood You're trying to recreate here or so I think), but they are still really weak. The only good part was chorus and I must say it sounds like You were so satisfied after writing it that You've tried to build the whole tune around this simple yet effective structure. Don't be so "we're all gonna die" when You compose, I'm sure You're capable of some happy upbeat tunes if You only try. Rating: 3 stars BTW could the collision of continents not be GREAT? You got me? It's a bit pretentious.
Posted 07/03/09 00:19 by Badcat16_1
I really love that song; especially the chorus. Il also love the transition between the chorus and the verse; I know some have said it to be poor but I just loved it cause it was so sudden and "abrubt" as someone said, that it brought my total attention to it. And the verse in itself I find to be pretty beautiful. In verse 2 I just loved the bass part (mes. 52 *o*) However I really hated the bridge 2 . I just went "what the hell is he trying to do???" I didn't quite like the interlude too but I really enjoyed verse 3. So to sum up everything I would say a great chorus/verse and... keep going 4.5 stars (I know I can't)

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